You Can Fly Şiiri - Yorumlar

Ali Soyyiğit
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Nothing is nice without you
If you want every one loves you
Leave me alone unless you want
Angles are free you know
You can fly where you want.

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  • Mehmet Sıddık Yalçın
    Mehmet Sıddık Yalçın 31.05.2007 - 22:04

    ben fransız kaldım...

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  • İlhan Keskinöz Teoforos
    İlhan Keskinöz Teoforos 03.11.2006 - 21:06

    for a man,
    is diffucult to love an angel;
    because of they can fly wherever thy want.

    but for the lover,
    he can not go anywhere
    accept the angel require it.

    ilhan keskinöz
    -teoforos-

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  • Hayati Dede
    Hayati Dede 11.09.2006 - 21:51

    But I can't fly.Congratulation

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  • Deniz Can Kutlu
    Deniz Can Kutlu 12.08.2006 - 17:12

    merhaba sayın ali soyyiğit. ingilizce şiir yazmak benim de düşündüğüm bir projeydi.devamını dilerim.yüreğinize sağlık.

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  • Mikdati Bal
    Mikdati Bal 12.08.2006 - 10:56

    Verry difficult to write in English
    At least you tryed
    No one can say it's wrong or right
    Flying was always the dream of mankind.
    I tryed to fly with mine car
    but I was instandly fined

    congratulations
    verry happy to know you
    My name is Mikdat Bal, I'm From Çaykara living in Holland
    with regards

    come visit me some times


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