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Bilal Geniş
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DO YOU KNOW THE MUSE...


Do you know..
I loved moon..
I loved stars...
I loved world..

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  • Fatma Güneş
    Fatma Güneş 11.01.2009 - 02:50

    You became my dreams...
    You became my imaginations.
    You became my night...
    You became my moon...
    You became my stars..
    You became my sun...
    You became my life...
    You became my poems...
    You become my pictures..

    VERY NICE, DEAR TEACHER

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  • Lucky Sunset
    Lucky Sunset 09.01.2009 - 02:33

    Your hair, same an silk..
    Your eyebrow. same an crescent..
    Your eyes, same an sea...
    Your cheeks, same an red apple..
    Your lips, same an cherry sweet.
    Your body, same an best model...
    I feel in love you..
    You became my dreams...
    You became my imaginations.
    You became my night...
    You became my moon...
    You became my stars..
    You became my sun...
    You became my life...
    You became my poems...
    You become my pictures..
    Do you know...
    I loved moon..
    I loved stars...
    I loved world..
    Now..
    I loved you..
    Star by moonlight...

    very nice

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  • Lucky Sunset
    Lucky Sunset 09.01.2009 - 02:31

    Hello an artist and a poet bilal. My name Lucky. The I am the your I liked website much. The you very big artist. Because and your works all world are being known and is being liked much. You draw art pictures oil painted and spatul have become magnificent. My favourite pictures Saintiras.nI read your poems wonderfull all..

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  • Azu Yılmaz
    Azu Yılmaz 08.01.2009 - 08:26

    You became my dreams...
    You became my imaginations.
    You became my night...
    You became my moon...
    You became my stars..
    You became my sun...
    You became my life...
    You became my poems...
    You become my pictures..

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  • Mehmet Yılmaz
    Mehmet Yılmaz 08.01.2009 - 06:41

    You became my dreams...
    You became my imaginations.
    You became my night...
    You became my moon...
    You became my stars..
    You became my sun...
    You became my life...
    You became my poems...
    You become my pictures..
    Do you know...
    I loved moon..
    I loved stars...
    I loved world..
    Now..
    I loved you..
    Star by moonlight...

    very beautiful poem..

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  • Ayşe Yılmaz
    Ayşe Yılmaz 25.12.2008 - 08:13

    Hello my darling..I am here...I love you...I miss you...I kiss you...

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  • Azu Yılmaz
    Azu Yılmaz 24.12.2008 - 05:12

    woooow ...your the muse wonderful..same an angel.

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  • Azu Yılmaz
    Azu Yılmaz 24.12.2008 - 05:10

    Star by moonlight...
    I saw you..
    Your hair, same an silk..
    Your eyebrow. same an crescent..
    Your eyes, same an sea...
    Your cheeks, same an red apple..
    Your lips, same an cherry sweet.
    Your body, same an best model...
    I feel in love you..
    You became my dreams...
    You became my imaginations.
    You became my night...
    You became my moon...
    You became my stars..
    You became my sun...
    You became my life...
    You became my poems...
    You become my pictures..
    Do you know...
    I loved moon..
    I loved stars...
    I loved world..
    Now..
    I loved you..
    Star by moonlight...

    Very beautiful bravo...

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